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MuinXhan1
February 11th, 2015, 04:44 AM
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need some opinions and advice I'm terrible making art but I'm better at manipulating it
so what you guys think? and I know it's not domo related =P

Yaoisama
February 11th, 2015, 06:27 AM
I don't quite understand that it is you're asking, tbh ö.ö

CheanChan
February 11th, 2015, 06:32 AM
i think he wants pie.

MuinXhan1
February 11th, 2015, 07:26 AM
I don't quite understand that it is you're asking, tbh ö.ö

hm lemme try this
I suck at drawing so I'm asking how well did I manage to blend the 2 images together
think that'll clear it up

Succubusty
February 11th, 2015, 10:48 AM
It's a good start, but there are a few issues with this piece.
There's a clear line of division where one image ends and the other begins. The image on the left is clearly darker & you can see the dark background contrast against the light one of the image on the right. I might recommend using a clipping layer with a black/white gradient to make one side transparent.

Also, the top right corner has a bit of strange blending, where its purely white in the corner, then behind the character you can see a smudged line where the blending of the background begins. I would do something about that as well, since it draws the eyes away in a strange way.

Hope that helps. c:

Hyan2014
February 11th, 2015, 01:28 PM
It's a good start, but there are a few issues with this piece.
There's a clear line of division where one image ends and the other begins. The image on the left is clearly darker & you can see the dark background contrast against the light one of the image on the right. I might recommend using a clipping layer with a black/white gradient to make one side transparent.

Also, the top right corner has a bit of strange blending, where its purely white in the corner, then behind the character you can see a smudged line where the blending of the background begins. I would do something about that as well, since it draws the eyes away in a strange way.

Hope that helps. c:

That is it, try a dark background with some smooth transparence in the main layer where the lines blend

MuinXhan1
February 11th, 2015, 03:22 PM
thanks for the tips and such I was using the eye drop tool to pull the color from the dark image for the gradient guess the color didnt register well

Nekori
February 11th, 2015, 05:46 PM
I'm a huge fan of Warframe. ♥ I think you did okay but the black square on the left side does pull away a little bit from the work in terms of unity.

MuinXhan1
February 11th, 2015, 06:29 PM
I'm a huge fan of Warframe. ♥ I think you did okay but the black square on the left side does pull away a little bit from the work in terms of unity.
another fellow tenno awesome! but yea I'm probably gonna make another with what advice been given here so far

and maybe later on we could duo up in warframe and go ninja something? heh