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Shiono
December 12th, 2016, 02:34 PM
Lucent Heart: Christmas Song Rewrite Contest

How to join:

Rewrite some or all the lyrics of a Christmas song/poem/carol with Lucent Heart elements and post it in this thread!

Examples of Christmas Songs:


Jingle Bells
12 Day of Christmas
Frosty The Snowman
Rudolph the Red nose Reindeer
Deck the Hall
Joy To The World
Silent Night
White Christmas
Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas
Rockin Around the Christmas Tree
It's the Most Wonderful Time of Year
Santa Baby
Last Christmas
All I Want for Christmas is You

Prizes:


1st place - 20.000 SP worth of items + 50 Event Points
2nd place - 13.000 SP worth of items + 30 Event Points
3rd place - 8.000 SP worth of items + 20 Event Points
Qualified Participants - 7 Original Honey Cakes + 10 Event Points

General Rules:


The rewritten song must have Lucent Heart elements/references.
There must be effort put into the entry or it does not qualify. We will decide if something is qualified as an entry or not.
The post/entry must follow forum post rules.
No plagiarism is allowed.
No alternate accounts may submit entries.
No banned players may submit entries.
Do not include people in your work without their permission.
You can't use last year's event submission, even if you haven't won.
You may submit up to 4 entries but you can only win once.

Deadline

December 31st 2016, 11:59PM EST

Miiiiiiiiikeey
December 12th, 2016, 09:20 PM
Jingle Bells - (GVG)

Dashing through Thereall
With 3k movement speed
O'er the noobs we go
Laughing all the way (Hahaha)

Metal on metal rings
Making ears drums sing
Oh what fun is it to onslaught enemies tonight

Oh GVG, GVG
GVG gives me life
Oh what fun it is to crack some level 50 skulls tonight

Oh GVG, GVG
GVG gives me life
Oh what fun it is to use Afyra when in fright

A day or two ago
I thought I'd do alright
And soon O'er hill came a God set havin'
Level 80 repping monster in the night
Try all as I may
There was no second of a fight
Soon as I turned my blade and swung a CM took my life!

Oh GVG, GVG
GVG took my life
Oh what fun is to get your face smashed in tonight

Oh GVG, GVG
GVG took my life
Wow I'm glad we don't lose dura or else I might cry

Oh GVG, GVG
GVG took my pride
On a second note I think I'll just curl right up and die.

December 12th, 2016.
IGN: Maihime

Miiiiiiiiikeey
December 13th, 2016, 05:46 AM
Santa Baby - (Cupid Baby)

Cupid baby, slip an SM onto my list, for me
I've been an awful good girl
Cupid baby, so hurry up and listen to me

Cupid baby, make them strong enough to kick my butt, please
I'll wait for you dear
Cupid baby, so hurry up and listen to me

Think of all the EXP I've missed
Think of all the SM's I haven't kissed
Next year I can be just as good
If you'd simply fulfill my greatest wish

Cupid baby, I want the emotes unlocked too
And I'm not talking about just a few
I've been an angel all year
Cupid baby, so hurry up and listen to me

Cupid honey, one thing that I want, an SM to flaunt
around Thereall and in my Guild too
Cupid baby, so hurry up and listen to me

Cupid cutie, fill my slots with SM's tonight
You can do it anytime
Cupid cutie, so hurry up and listen to me

Come and fulfill my greatest wish
No matter who it is
I really do believe in you
Let's see if you believe in me

Cupid baby, I forgot to mention one little thing, a ring
I don't mean on the phone
Cupid baby, so hurry up and listen to me
Hurry up and listen to me
Hurry up and listen

December 13th, 2016.
IGN: Maihime

Miiiiiiiiikeey
December 13th, 2016, 05:55 AM
It's the Most Wonderful Time of Year - (It's the most wonderful time of the week)

It's the most wonderful time of the week
With flame wars a flamin'
And everyone telling you you're far too weak
It's the most wonderful time of the week

It's the hap-happiest day of them all
Noobies for roasting
And carnage engrossing your line of sight
There'll be scary old stories
And tales of the glories of
GVG long long ago

It's the most wonderful time of the week
There'll be many missed spells
And hearts will be pumping
When dangerous ones are near
It's the most wonderful time of the week

There'll be banners for protecting
Noobies for roasting
And carnage engrossing your line of sight
There'll be scary old stories
And tales of the glories of
GVG long long ago

It's the most wonderful time of the week
There'll be many missed spells
And hearts will be pounding
When dangerous ones are near

It's the most wonderful time
Yes the most wonderful time
Oh the most wonderful time
Of the week

December 13th, 2016.
IGN: Maihime

Miiiiiiiiikeey
December 13th, 2016, 06:02 AM
Deck The Halls - (Deck Thereall)

Deck Thereall with endless stalls
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
'Tis the season to be greedy
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
Don we now our IM apparel
Fa-la-la, la-la-la, la-la-la
Troll the high levels with Will Ferrel
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la

See the blazing noobs before us
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
Strike them down and join the chorus
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
Follow me in merry measure
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
While I tell of dungeons' treasure
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la

Fast away the old gear passes
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
Hail the new sets, lads and lasses
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
Sing we joyous, all together
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la
heedless of the wind and weather
Fa-la-la-la-la, la-la-la-la

December 13th, 2016.
IGN: Maihime

Porrim
December 13th, 2016, 02:33 PM
12 Days of Christmas - 12 Ways of Suba

On my first day of playing, Suba gave to me - a friendly NPC just for me
On my second day of playing, Suba gave to me - Two Starry Boxes and another NPC just for me
On my third day of playing, Suba gave to me - A new set of armor, more Starry Boxes, and another quest N P C
On my forth day of playing, Suba gave to me - A promise for love, a new set of armor, again with Starry Boxes, and another quest N P C
On my fifth day of playing, Suba gave to me - Five new dailies! Another failed love, a new set of armor, more Starry Boxes, and a fancy thing called K R E
On the sixth day of playing, Suba gave to me - Six KREs, Five new dailies! A second shot at love, no new armor now, no more Starry Boxes, Where's that dungeon quest NPC?
On the seventh week of playing, Suba gave to me - Seven hours grinding, Six KREs, Five new dailies! Is it really love?, time to farm for armor, need my own profession, Where can I find that one NPC?
On the eigth week of playing, Suba gave to me - 8 million Gold, seven hours grinding, six KREs, five new dailies! Look we're getting married, making my own armor, I'm a Jeweler now, Where is the craft NPC?
On the ninth week of playing, Suba gave to me - 9 guild invitations, 8 thousand gold, seven hours grinding, six KREs, five more dailies! PvP is fun, need better weapons, learning about pets, and a buying stall for cookies too.
On the tenth month of playing, Suba gave to me - 10 good friends, 9 guild versus guild, 8 new alts, seven hours grinding, six KREs, five new dailies! I'm merciless now, time to farm new armor, selling subapoints, but where do I get event points?
On the eleventh month of playing, Suba gave to me - 11 drama queens, 10 good friends, 9 new pets, 8 new stands, seven hours grinding, six KREs, five more dailies! A new two person mount, learning new armor, I'm on the billboards, buying EP for 1mill each
On the twelth month of playing, Suba gave to me - 12 cool GMs, 11 drama queens, 10 good friends, 9 house invasions, 8 OP buffs, seven hours grinding, six dungeons long, five same dailies! Full perfect armor, perfect weapons to match, and I finally know all of the N P Cs!
...
Wait what's this one for?

December 13th, 2016
Written by Alainn
IGN: Alainn

Natsumeia09
December 15th, 2016, 07:49 AM
~Twelve Lucent Days of Christmas~

On the First day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Second day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Third day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Fourth day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Four Eyes of Demons
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Fifth day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Five Nemean Cores
Four Eyes of Demons
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Sixth day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Six Arcane Pets
Five Nemean Cores
Four Eyes of Demons
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Seventh day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Seven DreamLand Alloys
Six Arcane Pets
Five Nemean Cores
Four Eyes of Demons
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Eighth day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Eight Treasure Chests
Seven DreamLand Alloys
Six Arcane Pets
Five Nemean Cores
Four Eyes of Demons
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Ninth day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Nine Suicide Pots
Eight Treasure Chests
Seven DreamLand Alloys
Six Arcane Pets
Five Nemean Cores
Four Eyes of Demons
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Tenth day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Ten Resurrection scrolls
Nine Suicide Pots
Eight Treasure Chests
Seven DreamLand Alloys
Six Arcane Pets
Five Nemean Cores
Four Eyes of Demons
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Eleventh day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
Eleven Scarlet Crystals
Ten Resurrection scrolls
Nine Suicide Pots
Eight Treasure Chests
Seven DreamLand Alloys
Six Arcane Pets
Five Nemean Cores
Four Eyes of Demons
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

On the Twelfth day of Christmas
My SoulMate sent to me:
12 Dream Grade Items
Eleven Scarlet Crystals
Ten Resurrection scrolls
Nine Suicide Pots
Eight Treasure Chests
Seven DreamLand Alloys
Six Arcane Pets
Five Nemean Cores
Four Eyes of Demons
Three Elk Coupons
Two Duped Hera's Blades
and A Perfect Doomsday God's Blade

LoveTeemo
December 15th, 2016, 08:26 AM
Silent Night ( Lucent Heart Version )

Lucent Heart
-----------------------------------------------------------------

Lucent Heart, Lucent Heart
First time play, I’m so blur
But as soon as I adapt
The environment in the game
Now I can make friends
Now I can make friends

Lucent Heart, Lucent Heart
I’m so glad, I have found
The game which I long looking for
So much fun I have enjoyed
So much fun I have enjoyed

Lucent Heart, Lucent Heart
Finally, I did it
Level to max in the game
And I am here celebrating
Thank you Lucent Heart
Thank you Lucent Heart


Date: 15th Dec 2016
In-Game Name: CherryBear

ConstanceLH
December 16th, 2016, 11:21 PM
Here Comes Santa Clause/ Here Comes Level 80's

Here comes level 80's, here comes level 80's
Right down Thereall's main
Poseidon and Aries and all of their pets
Raising all their buffs
Skills are raging and noobs are running
All is done before they are in sight
So noobs hold on to you life's and say your prayers
'Cause level 80's have come to fight!

Here comes level 80's, here comes level 80's
Right down Thereall's main
They've got them dream grades that plumed with stats
That drive all those noobs insane
See those effects as they attack
Oh what a powerful sight
So jump outta the way and hide cause your skill do lack
'Cause level 80's have come to fight!

Here come level 80's, here come level 80's
Right down Thereall's main
They don't care if you got Afrya or Medusa's shield
They'll defeat you all the same
Level 80's sees you only as creatures in a field
But please do try with all your might
And fill your bags with all your pots
'Cause level 80's have come to fight!

Here come level 80's, here come level 80's
right down Thereall's main
They will come around and knock you down
But know it all in fun just the same
Once their done they will help you out
And show you how to do it right
We're all LH players so for now don't pout
'Cause level 80's have come to fight.

*Is my first entry.. may add more later
IGN: Constance678

MimiTachikawa
December 22nd, 2016, 11:18 AM
ign:AngelWolf
song 12 days of christmas| 12 days of Therall

On the first day of christmas
Therall city sent to me
A big christmas tree

On the second day of christmas
therall city sent to me
Two Cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

On the third day of christmas
therall city sent to me
three stockings
two cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

On the fourth day of christmas
therall city sent to me
four elk coupons
three stockings
two cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

on the fifth day of christmas
therall city sent to me
five wedding rings
four elk coupons
three stockings
two cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

on the sixth day of christmas
therall ctiy sent to me
six praying ares
five wedding rings
four elk coupons
three stockngs
two cupid arros
and a big christmas tree

on the seventh day of christmas
therall city sent to me
seven miracle staffs
six praying ares
five wedding rings
four elk coupons
three stockings
two cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

on the eigth day of christmas
therall city sent to me
eight Arcane pets
seven miracle staffs
six praying ares
five wedding rings
four elk coupons
three stockings
two cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

on the ninth day of christmas
therall city sent to me
nine virgo beds
eight arcane pets
seven miracle staffs
six praying ares
five wedding rings
four elk coupons
three stockings
two cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

on the tenth day of christmas
therall city sent to me
ten dark horses
nine virgo beds
eight arcane pets
seven miracle staffs
six praying ares
five wedding rings
four elk coupons
three stockings
two cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

on the eleventh day of christmas
therall city sent to me
eleven snowmen
ten dark horses
nine virgo beds
eight arcane pets
seven miracle staffs
six praying ares
five wedding rings
four elk coupons
three stockings
two cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

on the twelfth day of christmas
therall city gave to me
twelve female fashions
eleven snow men
ten dark horses
nine virgo beds
eight arcane pets
seven miracle staffs
six praying ares
five wedding rings
four elk coupons
three stockings
two cupid arrows
and a big christmas tree

Mitzkat
December 27th, 2016, 12:18 AM
IGN: Mitz
Song: Joy to the World / Joy of Lucent Heart

Joy to the world, Lucent Heart has come!
Let noobs receive their gifts;
Let every one prepare their rooms,
And do a sleep over,
And also share their gifts,
And make a lot of little babies yeah!

Joy to the world, new outfits has come!
Let us buy SP now;
Please sell us cheap, please sell us cheap
Please sell us cheap SP!
Please sell us cheap SP!
Please sell us please sell us some cheap SP!

Give us more events, EP and elk coupons,
We want to get that chopper hat;
I wish I had one too, I wish I had one too.
But it's so hard to get
But it's so hard to get
Oh no someone selling it for 150m!

Over the stalls and many alts,
I look for christmas joys!
Like passive pets, and cute outfits
And a little bit of gear
And a new weapon to weild
And some noob and some noob who wants some help.

SmolElf
December 28th, 2016, 04:02 PM
IGN: ElvesAlfheimr
First Entry

Jingle Bells --> Bloody Cry (Boss Rush)

Rushing through the town
With Joy all over my face
Running O'er beasts,
Smiling all the way
Ha ha ha
Beasts chasing after me,
making spirits drown
What fun it is to frown and cry
A bloody song tonight

Oh, Bloody cry, bloody cry
Crying all the way
Oh, what fun it is to cry
With a whole herd chasing me
Bloody Cry, Bloody Cry
Rushing all the way
Oh, what fun it is to cry
With a whole herd chasing me
(Eee)

A minute or two ago,
I thought I'd take a flag,
And soon Miss Queen Tatoes
Came rushing all the way;
Another herd is pounding
Misfortune seemed a lot
She pulled me,
And went dashing all the way.

Oh, Bloody Cry, bloody cry
Crying all the way
Oh, what fun it is to cry
With a whole herd chasing me
Bloody Cry, bloody cry
Crying all the way
Oh, what fun it is to cry
With a whole herd chasing me
(Eee)
Bloody Cry, Bloody Cry,
Crying all the way!
Oh, What fun it is to cry
With a whole herd chasing me
Bloody Cry, bloody cry,
Crying all the way!
Oh, What fun it is to cry
With a whole herd chasing me

Now jailed inside out
Wishing while you're alive
Take the last words tonight
And cry this bloody song
Just pray a hot potatoe
One thousand times my size
Hitch it to the bloody herd
And burn! you'll survive

Bloody Cry, Bloody Cry,
Crying all the way!
Oh, What fun it is to cry
With a whole herd chasing me.
Bloody Cry, Bloody Cry,
Crying all the way!
Oh, What fun it is to cry
With a whole herd chasing me.
(Eeeeeeee)

Original Song Lyrics:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3PgNPc-iFW8

Newlordvadr810Y
December 28th, 2016, 10:22 PM
Frosty the Snowman, was an unhappy soul,
With a corn cob pipe and a button nose, and two eyes made of coal.

Frosty the Snowman, with a legion of snowmen,
At lovers garden, attacked men and women alike one day.

There must have been some magic in that old machine they found,

For when it was attacked, he began to summon smen of snow.

Oh, Frosty, the Snowman, was alive as he could be;
and the children say he could attack and curse,
just the same as you and me.

Whammy bam, bam, thumpety thump, thump,
look at Frosty go.

Whammy bam, bam, thumpety thump, thump,
over the hills of snow.

And then finally, the machine was defeated,
so frosty said, "Thank you" and lit the sky with "Merry Christmas"

Down to the village, with a wizardstaff in his hand,
Running here and there, all around the square,
sayin', "Thank you, Thank you"

He said he was sorry, for making them freeze;

and only paused a moment, when he heard him holler, "Stop!"

For Frosty, the Snowman, had to hurry on his way,
But he waved goodbye, sayin' "Don't cry, I'll be back again some day."

AcapucoLeo
December 30th, 2016, 01:47 PM
Frosty The Snowman ( Cadena The Dark Goddess )

Cadena the dark goddess was a bitter distant soul
With an itty bity waist and round things in your face
And two eyes made of coal

Cadena the dark goddess is a fairy tale they say
She was made out of hate but the adults know how she came to strike one day
There must have been some magic in those poems she got sent
For when they touched the ground monsters ran around

Oh Cadena the dark goddess
Was alive as she could be
And the adults says she could laugh
and slay just the same as you and me

Thumpity thump thump
Thumpity thump thump

Look at Cadena go

Thumpity thump thump
Thumpity thump thump

Over the world we know

Cadena the dark goddess knew
the darkness was great that day
So she said
Let's slay and
we'll have some players fear
now before they burn away
Down to the acadia
with a staff in her hand
Flying here and there all
around the death square saying
Fight me if you can
She led them through the darkness of town
right to the fire of inferno
And she only paused a moment when
she heard her holler "OMG!"
For Cadena the dark goddess
had to hurry her victim away
But she killed saying
Don't you cry
I'll be back to slay again some day

thumpity thump thump
thumpity thump thump

Look at Cadena go

thumpity thump thump
thumpity thump thump

Over the world we know

AngelicWhispers
December 31st, 2016, 03:48 PM
Kill it all!: Hera Theme Song (Let It Snow)
Rewritten by: Delila


Oh these birdies are frickin annoying,
But with their HPs we are toying,
And with double xp scrolls going strong,
Kill it all! Kill it all! Kill it all!

We're in Hera and the mobs are dropping,
But spawns, they are unstopping.
With pet buffs it's an OP brawl,
Kill it all! Kill it all! Kill it all!

When we finally clear the trash,
and have to start it all over once more
Through the monsters we're gunna thrash,
All the things are surely done for!

We're finally getting close to 80
This grind sure hasn't be hasty.
But our hard work is sure paying off!
Kill it all! Kill it all! Kill it all!

SmolElf
December 31st, 2016, 07:34 PM
IGN: ElvesAlfheimr
Second Entry

Rudolph the Red Nosed Reindeer ---> Spoopy the Spooky GM

You know Luna and Aether and Mudkip and Casper
Cadena and Theia and Baguette and Lettuce
But do you recall
The most Spooky GM of all?
Spoopy the Spooky GM
Spookiest he can be
And if you ever saw him
He'll genecide with raids
All of the other GMs
Stabbed him and gave more work
They never let poor Spoopy
Finish and study exams
Then one foggy Christmas Eve
Suba came to say
"Spoopy, with your beard so spooky
Won't you sleep tonight?"
Then how the GMs loved him
As they cried out with glee
"Spoopy the Spooky GM
You'll go down in history"
Spoopy the Spooky GM
Spookiest he can be
And if you ever saw him
He'll genecide with raids
All of the other GMs
Stabbed him and gave more work
They never let poor Spoopy
Finished and study exams
Then one foggy Christmas Eve
Suba came to say
"Spoopy, with your beard so spooky
Won't you sleep tonight?"
Then how the GMs loved him
As they cried out with glee
"Spoopy the Spooky GM
You'll go down in history."

Original Song Lyrics:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hega-GxyW6o

Aks143
December 31st, 2016, 11:36 PM
IGN - Aks143

Song: Santa baby

Santa baby, slip a fox outfit under the tree for me
Been an awful good girl
Santa baby, and hurry down to Thereall tonight
Santa baby, a pumpkin carriage too, light golden
I'll wait up for you, dear
Santa baby, and hurry down to Air plaza tonight
Think of all the dance master I've missed
Think of all the Ore seekers that I haven't killed
Next year I could be also good
If you'll check off my Christmas list
Santa honey, I want a Sabrinami and really that's not a lot
Been an angel all year
Santa baby, and hurry down to Thereall tonight
Santa cutie, there's one thing I really do need, the deed
To a Hera dungeon
Santa cutie, and hurry down to Thereall tonight
Santa baby, and fill my stocking with honey cakes and cookies
Sign your ‘event points’ on the line
Santa baby, and hurry down to Thereall tonight
Come and Change my hair color
With some dyes bought at item mall
I really do believe in you
Let's see if you believe in me
Santa baby, forgot to mention one little thing, a Cleoptera pet
I don't mean a gachapon
Santa baby, and hurry down to Thereall tonight
Hurry down to Thereall tonight
Hurry, tonight

Kvrinda1613Wl08
January 1st, 2017, 12:01 AM
IGN - ElDragoNiks

Song: I dont want a lot for Christmas

I don't want a lot for Christmas
There is just one thing I need
I don't care about the other pets
for sale or for free.
I just want Barbarossa for my own
More than you could ever know
Make my wish come true oh
All I want for Christmas barba is you

I don't want a lot for Christmas
There is just one thing I need
I don't care about the other pets
for sale or for free.
I don't need to shout my desire
There in the chatting space
Santa Claus won't make me satisfied
With Caesar on Christmas day

I just want barba for my own
More than you could ever know
Make my wish come true oh
All I want for Christmas barba is you

I won't ask for much this Christmas
I won't ask ep or gold, and I
I just wanna keep on waiting
for Barba on ship to show

I won't make a fuss and shout on
the zone n sound like a prick
I won't even wait all day
To hear offers ridiculous n sick

'Cause I just want Barba now right
Standing beside me in a fight
What more can I do
Oh, Barba all I want for Christmas is you

All the pets are roamin
So wonderful everywhere
And the sound of Player's
cheers fill the air

And everyone is cheering
I see those contract offers piling
Someone won't you bring me
The one I really need
Won't you please bring a Barba to me quickly

I don't want a lot for Christmas
This is all I'm asking for
I just wanna see my barba
Fighting to protect those i adore

I just want Barbarossa for my own
More than anyone could ever know
Let my wish come true
Barba all I want for Christmas is you

All I want for Christmas is you, Barba